The Perception Prize Winner:
Debra Daniel
Honorable Mentions:
Richard Taylor, Brian Slusher
The Exterminator Knows by Odor Alone
what creature has died under our house.
He sniffs our kitchen, den, dining room,
tells us it’s most likely more than one,
a family of critters, he says. Possum,
a passel of possums, he says. Mama
with young clasping her back. Joeys,
that’s what they’re called, he says and smiles.
My nose has been smelling this business
for decades. Nothing compares to possum.
We watch him clamber into his overalls
and hood, strap his flashlight onto his head,
tighten his mask, tug on gloves, and, on all fours,
crawl into the underbelly of our house
where he’ll burrow around our foundation.
In the kitchen we grimace again at the stench
that has overcome our breaths and appetites.
Beneath us, we hear him bumping, hear him
whistling as he clears death from our nostrils.
Judge’s Comment:
Such vivid images and attention to sounds - just the title is a melody, then the assonance of "sniffs our kitchen," "burrow around our foundation," "In the kitchen we grimace."